Spring Breakdown Rap!

WELCOME TO MR FISHER'S CLASS

Spring Breakdown Rap!

4/6/2021

What seed will you grow?

WORD WORK:

Pretest and word analysis

MATH:

Get caught up on all class work
I will provide the answer key for the units tomorrow (Sorry Amrita I cant do it today)

RAP:

Six lines with some rhyming

HOMEWORK ALERTS:

Get them signed and returned

POST A RESPONSE:

Learning Intention: I can write a story using the word work words.

Success Criteria:

Include all word work words
The story shows the meaning of the words
Make it funny
Use paragraphs

Reply to another students story giving some feedback, encouragement or ask a question
Reply to any comments you receive

Danise

4/6/2021 04:24:35 pm

Bob

4/6/2021 05:27:57 pm

2nd

Matthew

4/6/2021 06:40:13 pm

Rhea

4/6/2021 07:03:16 pm

Once there was a pacifist, atheist, and judge called John who was known for giving ceremonial speeches. He was an informer of peace and kindness, the opposite nature of a cynical person. However, he was an also very lenient person. One day, when he was judging a trial, it was evident that the accused person was guilty. However, after he reviewed the alleged criminal's dossier, John did not think that putting him into a jail would not solve the problem because he believed that everything was to be settled in peace. Instead, John judged the criminal guilty, and only required the accused man to isolate himself from the public in a hotel for one week. The military made reconnaissances frequently around the house. John thought that this would open a vestibule to pacifism, but it instead caused chaos. Everyday, citizens from the city went to complain why John did not declare a stricter punishment and sent convoluted suggestions of kinds of punishment to the criminal, while reporters saw this as a chance to publish new articles; they took out their camcorders and filmed the streets. After a week of nonstop disorder and deafening shouts of different remarks and tones, John's bigwig finally declared a more severe punishment for the criminal.

To remember this disastrous event in history, a huge oblong tumulus buries John in that center of America.

Mr. Fisher

4/6/2021 08:26:59 pm

@Rhea-On my I really enjoyed this. I laughed out-loud:) Can you have a vestibule to pacifism? Hmmmm this is an interesting idea and way to use this word. I need to think about this.

Great piece.

Rhea

4/6/2021 08:36:13 pm

Thanks! I'll change up the usage of the word.

Rhea

4/6/2021 08:39:05 pm

Once there was a pacifist, atheist, and judge called John who was known for giving ceremonial speeches. He was an informer of peace and kindness, the opposite nature of a cynical person. However, he was an also very lenient person. One day, when he was judging a trial, it was evident that the accused person was guilty. However, after he reviewed the alleged criminal's dossier, John did not think that putting him into a jail would not solve the problem because he believed that everything was to be settled in peace. Instead, John judged the criminal guilty, and only required the accused man to isolate himself from the public in a hotel for one week. The military made reconnaissances frequently around the house and entered the vestibule of the house a few times to check on the criminal. John thought that this would inspire people to belive in pacifism, but it instead caused chaos. Everyday, citizens from the city went to complain why John did not declare a stricter punishment and sent convoluted suggestions of kinds of punishment to the criminal, while reporters saw this as a chance to publish new articles; they took out their camcorders and filmed the streets. After a week of nonstop disorder and deafening shouts of different remarks and tones, John's bigwig finally declared a more severe punishment for the criminal.

To remember this disastrous event in history, a huge oblong tumulus buries John in the center of America.

Waylon Shi

4/7/2021 09:20:09 am

Noice

Rhea

4/7/2021 09:30:44 am

Once there was a pacifist, atheist, and judge called John who was known for giving ceremonial speeches about why there was no god. He was an informer of peace and kindness, the opposite nature of a cynical person. However, he was an also very lenient person who caused many chaotic cases. This is one of the true events known as the Criminal Punishment Protest.

One day, when he was judging a trial, it was evident that the accused person was guilty. However, after he reviewed the alleged criminal's dossier, John did not think that putting him into a jail would not solve the problem because he believed that everything was to be settled in peace. Instead, John judged the criminal guilty, and only required the accused man to isolate himself from the public in a hotel for one week. The military made reconnaissances frequently around the house. John thought that this would open a vestibule to pacifism, but it instead caused chaos. Everyday, citizens from the city went to complain why John did not declare a stricter punishment and sent convoluted suggestions of kinds of punishment to the criminal, while reporters saw this as a chance to publish new articles; they took out their camcorders and filmed the streets. After a week of nonstop disorder and deafening shouts of different remarks and tones, John's bigwig finally declared a more severe punishment for the criminal.

To remember this disastrous event in history, a huge oblong tumulus buries John in that center of America.

Jeffrey

4/6/2021 07:18:31 pm

Matthew

4/6/2021 07:59:29 pm

Once there was a bigwig called Jimmy. He was very isolated because his boss told him to. His boss had a dossier about him. He was a pacifists and a atheist. He has a camcorder to take videos about the funny things about him. The camcorder has wired tones. The oblong of the camcorder is a square. Jimmy had to go to a ceremonial tumulus. The vestibule was very lenient. The informer talked about the reconnaissance of the military.
The End!!!

Gabriel

4/6/2021 08:07:35 pm

This is very confusing, you did include every word. But some words don't make sense of how you are using them, and the sentences don't relate. Try searching up some meanings and then revise the sentences.

Ryan

4/6/2021 08:14:19 pm

There once was a man named David. He was a lenient person, an atheist, a pacifist, but also quite cynical. He had a bleak outlook on the world, sharing his views through his old camcorder, which he used to capture all his thoughts, which sometimes were convoluted and confusing. One day, he spotted a bigwig celebrity who became famous by being an informer on important topics at a global news network, he went by Danny. David thought that if he could sway somebody of Danny's stature and fame to see his views, he could share his ideas with the masses, making him famous. Of course, if his idea were to ever work, he would have to do reconnaissance first, getting to know how Danny walked talked and acted, so that he could connect with him better and get Danny to trust him.

Over the course of half a week, David silently crept around Danny's house, going through a vestibule situated at the back of Danny's house. David created a whole dossier about Danny, detailing everything he needed to know about him. Then, when Danny was walking out the front door of his estate, dressed oddly in some sort of ceremonial clothes with a sorrow tone on his face, David quickly followed behind, making sure not to draw attention to himself. David followed Danny around to an oblong hill which he soon found out was a tumulus.

Danny knelt and mumbled something under his breath. Though David was out of earshot, he felt that this was not the best time to intrude on Danny's life. So David left without a trace, only now realizing how heinous and terrible his plans were.

Rhea

4/6/2021 08:27:15 pm

This is a very interesting and flowing story! I really liked how the spelling words flowed so nicely.

Mr. Fisher

4/6/2021 08:30:46 pm

@Ryan- I really enjoyed this. You have a nice way of writing. I like the language you used. Intrude, heinous...great words:)

Suhani

4/6/2021 08:42:55 pm

5th

Gabriel

4/6/2021 08:47:48 pm

One day, Timmy, was taking a dossier about himself to his bigwig, it was his first day working. He was cynical about why his boss needed the information, but he just had to do what he was told to do if he wanted the job. When he had arrived at work, his boss was waiting for him at the vestibule of the building. He was really lenient, everyone liked him. Timmy noticed many people with camcorders recording them talking. He wasn't really comfortable, but he couldn't do anything. The boss told him he did a great job gathering all the information he needed and that he was hired. Timmy had a choice choosing either to be a spy, a pacifist, or an atheist for their company. Timmy thought it was such a foolish question, of course he would choose spy. He entered the building, it was surprisingly pretty, there were plants with shiny marbles, and there was a random tombstone with tumulus on it. Timmy read the words, apparently it was their company's first ever owner. The tombstone had many designs, it had weird ancient writing engraved on it, and it was in a oblong shape. It said on the front that all workers need to participate in a ceremonial grief every year on May 14th. The boss asked Timmy if he wanted a tour, and he accepted it. He went all around the building and met everyone. But there was just this one room he hadn't go in. Timmy asked the boss, "There is someone isolated inside, it is their punishment. They broke every rule so they have to stay in there for one year." replied the boss. Timmy was intimidated by the fact that they had punishments. It was really convoluted to him, he had a lot to learn. Suddenly, an informer came to report that a war was starting with another company. His tone of voice sounded very serious. He said they need to have a reconnaissance on their plan. The boss told Timmy wanted to do it, but Timmy said that he didn't even have training, and just like that, Timmy was sent to the room with the mysterious person.

I can't think of anything and I don't know how to make it funny.

Mr. Fisher

4/6/2021 09:02:30 pm

@Gabriel- Great story. Very creative. Where could you break this up into paragraphs? I think paragraphs would make this easier to read.

Gabriel

4/7/2021 09:38:42 am

One day, Timmy, was taking a dossier about himself to his bigwig, it was his first day working. He was cynical about why his boss needed the information, but he just had to do what he was told to do if he wanted the job.

When he had arrived at work, his boss was waiting for him at the vestibule of the building. He was really lenient, everyone liked him. Timmy noticed many people with camcorders recording them talking. He wasn't really comfortable, but he couldn't do anything. The boss told him he did a great job gathering all the information he needed and that he was hired. Timmy had a choice choosing either to be a spy, a pacifist, or an atheist for their company. Timmy thought it was such a foolish question, of course he would choose spy.

Timmy followed his boss into the building, it was surprisingly pretty, there were plants with shiny marbles, and there was a random tombstone with tumulus on it. Timmy read the words, apparently it was their company's first ever owner. The tombstone had many designs, it had weird ancient writing engraved on it, and it was in a oblong shape. It said on the front that all workers need to participate in a ceremonial grief every year on May 14th.

The boss asked Timmy if he wanted a tour, and he accepted it. He went all around the building and met everyone. But there was just this one room he hadn't go in. Timmy asked the boss, "There is someone isolated inside, it is their punishment. They broke every rule so they have to stay in there for one year." replied the boss. Timmy was intimidated by the fact that they had punishments. It was really convoluted to him, he had a lot to learn.

Suddenly, an informer came to report that a war was starting with another company. His tone of voice sounded very serious. He said they need to have a reconnaissance on their plan. The boss told Timmy to do it, but Timmy said that he didn't even have training, and just like that, Timmy was sent to the room with the mysterious person.

Shirley

4/6/2021 08:54:47 pm

There was a talking camcorder name Jeff. He was very selfless and talk to people in different tones deepening on he new of his day. He was like that because he was abandon. His owner was a cynical pacifists no body like him, but he was bigwig in a ceremonial events. He was also respects because he was informer and give lot of dossier to the police. One time, he got into a convoluted argument with a atheist. He lost the flight and storm out the vestibule. In frustration, he threw the death camcorder onto a tumulus. Jeff was isolated for a long time and lost in the forest, but he never give up on his owner. So, he travel for reconnaissance to see his owner. When he saw his owner, he saw that the owner was looking for he too. Jeff felt lenient for his owner, and hop back into his hands.

Shirley

4/6/2021 09:01:08 pm

There was a talking camcorder name Jeff. He was very selfless and talked to people in different tones depending on the mood of his day. He was like that because he was abandoned. His owner was a cynical pacifist nobody like him, but he was a bigwig in ceremonial events. He was also respected because he was an informer and gave a lot of dossier to the police. One time, he got into a convoluted argument with an atheist. He lost the fight and stormed out of the vestibule. In frustration, he threw Jeff the camcorder onto a tumulus and left him there. Jeff was isolated for a long time and was lost in the forest, but he never gave up on his owner. So, he travels for reconnaissance to see his owner. When he saw his owner, he saw that the owner was looking for him too. Jeff felt lenient for his owner and hopped back into his arms.

Amrita

4/6/2021 09:07:48 pm

@Mr.Fisher I’m busy and can’t do the Par today. I will do it tomorrow.

Bob

4/6/2021 09:44:26 pm

Once upon a time, a genius named Bob came to Canada. His dad had a CAMCORDER, but one of the lenses fell off a valley. Before that, he was a cameraman for all my class photos and CEREMONIAL stuff in school. My mom and dad are from different China cities, so they all have different TONES or accents when my family visits my grandparents. When we got out of the airport, we saw many trees beside the road, which was surprising because back in China, there weren't many trees, and they were all in OBLONG concrete boxes. I believe PACIFISTS were right because I agree that war is devastating to everyone. When I heard about the game Among us and played it, everyone had CYNICAL thoughts. My brother and I would watch a movie every weekend, and my dad would watch his shows. one of the shows was called 911, and it involved lots of INFORMERS and police discussing DOSSIER. My family was the opposite of atheists since we joined a Christian church in 2019. I read Harry Potter repeatedly, but I wouldn't say I liked too CONVOLUTED books because they bore me to sleep. I watched movies that involved some TUMULUS. One time I banged into a glass VESTIBULE in my old house when I wasn't looking.

Danise

4/7/2021 09:46:43 am

@Bob-your paragraph was great but that is not really a story. Is more like a paragraph with a lot of non-realated sentences. I think you can do some revision to make it more like a story. Great paragraph tho.

Suhani

4/6/2021 09:53:50 pm

Hi Mr.Fisher!
I won't be able to do the PAR since I am busy.
Sorry.

Tyler

4/6/2021 09:59:44 pm

So when we went to disney land, my mom took short videos with a camcorder. The camera was a old brick that you had to hold, it was silver and had oblong lens. My mom was the bigwig, she was the person to wake us up, make us sleep, what rides that we might like, she did everything so we could have a good time. The only problem she couldn't fix was the rides we liked and didn't like. My brother was being such a pacifist that we had to listen to the rides he wanted to go on which were really boring, like the ones where you ride a horse in circles. I would describe his cynical as really bossy and boring. He never wanted to take a risk in his life even if that meant not going on a roller coaster. The day we went to disney land it was my dads birthday and the people had a ceremonial with him, even the employees that gave him a cool pin to wear saying its my birth day. My mom informed us we were going to stay at disney land for about 2 weeks. My mom has been to disney land so she had a dossier of what all the rides were like. I'm a atheist but being there was like heaven. My mom always wanted us to have autographs and take pictures with the mascots but I really didn't understand why, I was convoluted about it but never asked her why. We did that for a day. When we had to go we went on a fairy, like as in a boat that would take about 3 days to get back to Canada. The vestibule was huge and was filled with people. On the fairy there were places to keep your kids in a fun center. That is how my parents isolated from us in peace while we had fun. The fun center was not really fun and all I did there was play Minecraft on their terrible wifi. The people there were not that lenient, but they didn't let us do anything we wanted there, for example I only could play Minecraft for 10 minutes before I got kicked off. (I couldn't use all the words and tell the story but I tried my best.)

Danise

4/6/2021 10:11:26 pm

Once upon a time, there was a man called Frank. He was an atheist and pacifist person. He was also a photographer that works for the ABC company and he always carries his camcorder to take videos and photos. One day, Frank went up to his bigwig and show him the photos that he took. His bigwig is a cynical person and always use a very weird tone to talk. Frank walked up to him and showed him the photos, his bigwig didn't trust him and think he photoshopped it. Frank feels really unhappy and got into a convoluted argument with his bigwig. His bigwig got really mad after and he needs Frank to isolate in a hotel and not able to go back to work for 2 weeks. His bigwig gave Frank's dossier to the person that watches Frank explain why is he there. His bigwig leave Frank alone and got back to work. After a few days Frank got bored and try to sneak out, however vestibule is not lock and the watcher was a very lenient so he let him leave (that means his bigwig trusted the wrong person) He knows that his bigwig is giving out a speeches in a ceremonial event. He tried to get in but he knows he needs to pass the reconnaissance. He failed the first time but the second time he hid inside a box and got shifted in. He sat on the audience seat a d his bigwig was so surprised when he saw Frank. His bigwig started to have even more trust issues and his temper got even worse. He doesn't trust Frank anymore and he killed Frank and put him inside an oblong box and covered with tumulus. The boss doesn't trust anyone anymore and so he got in jail and he only trusted himself.

Danise

4/6/2021 10:13:35 pm

Is a pretty weird story because I don't know what to write.

Annisa

4/6/2021 10:23:30 pm

Haha me too :)

Danise 2.0

4/7/2021 09:34:45 am

Once upon a time, there was a man called Frank. He was an atheist and pacifist person. He was also a photographer that works for the ABC company and he always carries his camcorder to take videos and photos.

One day, Frank went up to his bigwig and show him the photos that he took. His bigwig called Gary. He was a cynical person and always use a very weird tone to talk. Frank walked up to him and showed him the photos, Gary didn't trust him and think he photoshopped it. Frank feels really unhappy and got into a convoluted argument with Gary. Gary got really mad after, and he needs Frank to isolate in a hotel and not able to go back to work for 2 weeks. Gary gave Frank's dossier to the person that watches Frank explain why is he there. Gary leave Frank alone and got back to work.

After a few days Frank got bored and try to sneak out, however vestibule is not lock and the watcher was a very lenient so he let him leave (that means his bigwig trusted the wrong person) He knows that Gary was giving out a speeches in a ceremonial event. He tried to get in but he knows he needs to pass the reconnaissance. He failed the first time but the second time he hid inside a box and got shifted in. He sat on the audience seat and Gary was so surprised when he saw Frank. Gary started to have even more trust issues and his temper got even worse. He doesn't trust Frank anymore and he killed Frank and put him inside a huge oblong box that can fit a person inside. Then, he covered the box with tumulus.

Gary didn't trust anyone anymore. He got in jial because of killing Frank. He spent rest of his life in jail and he only trust himself ever again.

Annisa

4/6/2021 10:23:13 pm

There was once a lawyer named Alex who was an atheist. Despite his atheism, he was a pacifist with convoluted beliefs. He was a deeply respected man, considered as a bigwig and an ceremonial and informational man by others. His client was a man named John, a very oblong-shaped man. John was cynical, and was very isolated as he had no family. One day, John visited the tumulus of his family. On the vestibule of the cemetery, Alex stood watching John to add to his dossier and was also there for a reconnaissance on Alex, secretly out of his own curiosity. After watching John for some time, Alex felt more lenient towards the other man as he realized he had suffered great loss. Suddenly, he lurched forward and dropped his camcorder. The fallen camcorder made a tone as it was broken, and as John turned to investigate the sudden sound, Alex bolted to entrance and left. The next day John questioned how Alex knew so much about him, only to find no answers.

Annisa

4/7/2021 09:46:52 am

Revision: Making the meanings of words more clear, separate into paragraphs, and revise story again.
There was once a lawyer named Alex who was an atheist. Despite his atheism, he was a pacifist with convoluted beliefs, as he did not believe in a God but he believed that violence was not the answer. He was a deeply respected man, considered as a bigwig and an important man as he successfully helped his clients all the time. His colleagues were intrigued by his behaviour as Alex was very informational as he somehow always knew many things about the client. Alex was also a ceremonial man, as he loved listening to traditions and performing in ceremonies, although he did not believe in the traditions. One evening, another client walked in. His client was an oblong-shaped man named John. John was cynical, and was very isolated as unfortunately, he had no family.
One day, John visited the tumulus of his family. In the vestibule of the cemetery, Alex stood watching John to add to his dossier and a reconnaissance on Alex, secretly out of his own curiosity. After watching John for some time, Alex felt more lenient towards the other man as he realized he had suffered great loss. Suddenly, he lurched forward and dropped his camcorder that was previously recording John. The fallen camcorder made a tone as it was broken, and as John turned to investigate the sudden sound, Alex bolted to entrance and left. The next day, John questioned how Alex knew so much about him, only to find no answers, although managing to successfully help John as well.

Jeffrey

4/6/2021 10:31:00 pm

I looked around the shop. There were not many camcorders left. I snatched one and dumped it into the truck. I called to the bigwig “Yo, I got it!”. As we finally arrived at the tumulus, the ceremonial event had just started. We were not too late. On the contrary, the informer was red-faced seeing that his camera crew was late. Soon after, the informer started to interview the different atheists that held the event. Since we were outsiders, the different Chinese tones kept on confusing us. As I worked with my crew, a police officer casually walked over to me. He asked one simple question, “are you a pacifist?”. The randomness bewildered me. I stood there confused. He asked again. I tried to be as lenient as possible and replied honestly saying how I do not believe that violence is the answer to problems. The second I said this, the police officer took me by the hand and dragged me to the vestibule. He handed me an oblong-shaped object and left immediately. He did not look like a cynical person to hurt me so I opened it up. Inside was an innocent USB from Seagate. I quickly returned back to the interview. Luckily, the informer was too engaged in interviewing people that he had not noticed me leave. When the day had ended, I stuck the USB into my personal laptop. Instantly, a dossier of some sort popped up. Digging through the files, I found out that there would be a reconnaissance mission to get us out of China. Apparently, China had violated code thirty-two thousand and four. We were to be evacuated as soon as possible. The president wanted to isolate China from all outside sources. The entire operation was convoluted but my team and I had evacuated safely.

Jeffrey

4/7/2021 09:32:51 am

I looked around the shop. There were not many camcorders left. I snatched one and dumped it into the truck. I called the bigwig “Yo, I got it!”. As we finally arrived at the tumulus, the ceremonial event had just started. We were not too late. On the contrary, the informer was red-faced seeing that his camera crew was late. Soon after, the informer started to interview the different atheists that held the event. Since we were outsiders, the different Chinese tones kept on confusing us.

As I worked with my crew, a police officer casually walked over to me. He asked one simple question, “are you a pacifist?”. The randomness bewildered me. I stood there confused. He asked again. I tried to be as lenient as possible and replied honestly saying how I do not believe that violence is the answer to problems. The second I said this, the police officer took me by the hand and dragged me to the vestibule. He handed me an oblong-shaped object and left immediately. He did not look like a cynical person to hurt me so I opened it up. Inside was an innocent USB from Seagate. I quickly returned back to the interview. Luckily, the informer was too engaged in interviewing people that he had not noticed me leave.

When the day had ended, I stuck the USB into my personal laptop. Instantly, a dossier of some sort popped up. Digging through the files, I found out that there would be a reconnaissance mission to get us out of China. Apparently, China had violated code thirty-two thousand and four. We were to be evacuated as soon as possible. The president wanted to isolate China from all outside sources. The entire operation was convoluted but my team and I had evacuated safely.

I do not know how to make this story humorous

Kim

4/6/2021 11:08:02 pm

There this guy who has a cynical character and a very bigwig towards , to the other people, he also change his tones while talking to the other people as if he's mocking them. One time they have to perform in stage while they're teacher is a camcorder, and Ellie is their informer and also their reconnaissance she sometimes would yell if someone made a mistake. Jean is a atheist and convoluted guy, at year 3092 there this virus and everybody have o isolated themselves to keep them safe and every person who's guarding outside is very pacifist, there this time were Jean got bored and had to doodle some oblong because he cant do anything. He's parent weren't that lenient ,he's parent is a religious people who always invited to ceremonial to do their vestibule, their words are very dossier. Their secret is they would go to tumulus to do some praying. the end

Kaitlyn

4/6/2021 11:13:45 pm

Magnus is an atheist. He didn't believe in many things, or people, for that matter. His cynical behavior towards life made his job as a police officer become more difficult as his perspective of everything was depressing. Even from the angle he used his camcorder to record and document cases made everything he filmed look bitter. One day, he was looking through a suspect's dossier when the bigwig of his cohort assigned him a new task. He was to be in court to make sure the judges weren't too lenient towards the criminal, and his boss thought he would be the perfect man for the job. The trial was set to be the next day. He got to the vestibule a bit early so that he had a lower chance of being attacked by the criminal on his way in. With his luck, it was almost expected. When he entered the court, the first thing he noticed was the shape. It was an elongated oblong shape that allowed everyone from any angle to look at the criminal at all times. The second thing he noticed was that the criminal was isolated in the middle. Not that the law-breaker needed more attnetion. He took his uncomfortable seat and tried to get comfy before the trial started. The criminal he was going to be making miserable spoke without flat tones, and used exaggerated hand gestures when he defended his crime. His defending speech was also extremely convoluted. His wild hand gestures messed up his focus and they way he spoke in a squeaky tone made it hard to pay attention to what he was actually saying. What he was sure he understood was that the law-breaker claimed he was a pacifist, who did his crime to stop violence. Clearly, it would only result in more violence on his part. Beside him, an informer murmured into his ear; "he sounds like he just came back from kindergarten" and he guffawed out loud. Everyone who was present swiveled their heads to stare at him. He felt himself shrinking into his seat and made a lazy wave for them to continue. His cheeks were orbs of red paint. He watched the reconnaissance cameras continue to stare him down with their watchful black eyes. He averted his gaze and glared at the criminal. He was explaining why he interrupted a ceremonial speech for the good, and while at it, 'accidentally' knocked over the tumulus of the creator of some violent invention that must be disposed of immediately. According to the judge, it was an offensive act and he had to pay for it. The criminal made the whole story sound comical. Eventually, everyone in the court was desperately trying to hold in their laughter. The jury banged their mallet and sentenced him to one hundred or more hours of community service as punishment. He didn't have the energy to make his punishment worse as all of it was put towards not humiliating himself once again on camera. He was trembling from holding in his snickers as he left the court single file. From that day forward, he decided he would try not to be a negative and bitter human being no longer, and look for the humor in any situation. Everyone wanted to be around him, and he was the life of the party, all because of that silly case. He often wondered which beach the criminal had cleaned up that day and chuckled to himself, imagining the criminal in a bright yellow vest, picking up trash with a pair of tongs provided for him. His smile never got brighter than that.

Kaitlyn

4/7/2021 09:36:37 am

Magnus is an atheist. He didn't believe in many things, or people, for that matter. His cynical behavior towards life made his job as a police officer become more difficult as his perspective of everything was depressing. Even from the angle he used his camcorder to record and document cases made everything he filmed look bitter. One day, he was looking through a suspect's dossier when the bigwig of his cohort assigned him a new task. He was to be in court to make sure the judges weren't too lenient towards the criminal, and his boss thought he would be the perfect man for the job. The trial was set to be the next day.
He got to the vestibule a bit early so that he had a lower chance of being attacked by the criminal on his way in. With his luck, it was almost expected. When he entered the court, the first thing he noticed was the shape. It was an elongated oblong shape that allowed everyone from any angle to look at the criminal at all times. The second thing he noticed was that the criminal was isolated in the middle. Not that the law-breaker needed more attnetion. He took his uncomfortable seat and tried to get comfy before the trial started.
The criminal he was going to be making miserable spoke without flat tones, and used exaggerated hand gestures when he defended his crime. His defending speech was also extremely convoluted. His wild hand gestures messed up his focus and they way he spoke in a squeaky tone made it hard to pay attention to what he was actually saying. What he was sure he understood was that the law-breaker claimed he was a pacifist, who did his crime to stop violence. Clearly, it would only result in more violence on his part. Beside him, an informer murmured into his ear; "he sounds like he just came back from kindergarten" and he guffawed out loud. Everyone who was present swiveled their heads to stare at him. He felt himself shrinking into his seat and made a lazy wave for them to continue. His cheeks were orbs of red paint. He watched the reconnaissance cameras continue to stare him down with their watchful black eyes. He averted his gaze and glared at the criminal. He was explaining why he interrupted and tried to protest at a ceremonial speech, and while at it, 'accidentally' knocked over the tumulus of the creator of some violent invention that must be disposed of immediately. According to the judge, it was an offensive act and you simply just go ahead and interrupt important speeches. The man would have to pay for it. The criminal made the whole story sound comical. Eventually, everyone in the court was desperately trying to hold in their laughter. The jury banged their mallet and sentenced him to one hundred or more hours of community service as punishment. He didn't have the energy to make his punishment worse as all of it was put towards not humiliating himself once again on camera. He was trembling from holding in his snickers as he left the court single file.

From that day forward, he decided he would try not to be a negative and bitter human being no longer, and look for the humor in any situation. Everyone wanted to be around him, and he was the life of the party, all because of that silly case. He often wondered which beach the criminal had cleaned up that day and chuckled to himself, imagining the criminal in a bright yellow vest, picking up trash with a pair of tongs provided for him. His smile never got brighter than that.

Kaitlyn 3rd attempt

4/7/2021 10:08:03 am

Magnus is an atheist. He didn't believe in many things, or people, for that matter. His cynical behavior towards life made his job as a police officer become more difficult as his perspective of everything was depressing. Even from the angle he used his camcorder to record and document cases made everything he filmed look bitter. One day, he was looking through a suspect's dossier when the bigwig of his cohort assigned him a new task. He was to be in court to make sure the judges weren't too lenient towards the criminal, and his boss thought he would be the perfect man for the job. The trial was set to be the next day.

He got to the vestibule a bit early so that he had a lower chance of being attacked by the criminal on his way in. With his luck, it was almost expected. When he entered the court, the first thing he noticed was the shape. It was an elongated oblong shape that allowed everyone from any angle to look at the criminal at all times. The second thing he noticed was that the criminal was isolated in the middle. Not that the law-breaker needed more attnetion. He took his uncomfortable seat and tried to get comfy before the trial started.

The criminal he was going to be making miserable spoke without flat tones, and used exaggerated hand gestures when he defended his crime. His defending speech was also extremely convoluted. His wild hand gestures messed up his focus and they way he spoke in a squeaky tone made it hard to pay attention to what he was actually saying. What he was sure he understood was that the law-breaker claimed he was a pacifist, who did his crime to stop violence. Clearly, it would only result in more violence on his part. Beside him, an informer murmured into his ear; "he sounds like he just came back from kindergarten" and he guffawed out loud. Everyone who was present swiveled their heads to stare at him. He felt himself shrinking into his seat and made a lazy wave for them to continue. His cheeks were orbs of red paint. He watched the reconnaissance cameras continue to stare him down with their watchful black eyes. He averted his gaze and glared at the criminal. He was explaining why he interrupted and tried to protest at a ceremonial speech, and while at it, 'accidentally' knocked over the tumulus of the creator of some violent invention that must be disposed of immediately. According to the judge, it was an offensive act and you simply just go ahead and interrupt important speeches. The man would have to pay for it. The criminal made the whole story sound comical. Eventually, everyone in the court was desperately trying to hold in their laughter. The jury banged their mallet and sentenced him to one hundred or more hours of community service as punishment. He didn't have the energy to make his punishment worse as all of it was put towards not humiliating himself once again on camera. He was trembling from holding in his snickers as he left the court single file.

From that day forward, he decided he would try not to be a negative and bitter human being no longer, and look for the humor in any situation. Everyone wanted to be around him, and he was the life of the party, all because of that silly case. He often wondered which beach the criminal had cleaned up that day and chuckled to himself, imagining the criminal in a bright yellow vest, picking up trash with a pair of tongs provided for him. His smile never got brighter than that.

Marivi

4/7/2021 07:22:37 am

A guy named Jake is an ATHEIST. He does not believe in things, in people, in PACIFISTS. He works as a news reporter and acts like a BIGWIG. His work mate, Bob, records all the footage. They are doing a report together about a discovery at a nearby TUMULUS cave. Inside the cave is a lovely jewel, a big OBLONG crystal. They both went in the cave, ready to film. After a while, the CAMCORDER battery died and it was dark out. Bob was LENIENT and shy while Jake was CYNICAL. They talked a while about CONVOLUTED RECONNAISSANCE. They decided to split up and ISOLATE while they wait for help. Their TONES were much deeper probably from dehydration and talking. As time passed, they were bored and split apart again. Jake found a ray of light leading to a VESTIBULE made of rocks. Once they got out of the cave, the INFORMER asked them to see the papers for this report on a DOSSIER. Jake has a lower position now instead of a CEREMONIAL position.

Leighton

4/7/2021 07:55:18 am

@mr fisher i wont be able to to the par

Waylon Shi

4/7/2021 09:24:26 am

.........................................................................................................................

Bob

4/7/2021 09:29:43 am

bruh

Jason

4/7/2021 09:35:58 am

Why are you saying bruh for

Shirley

4/7/2021 09:38:14 am

Revised:

There was a talking camcorder name Jeff. He was very selfless and talked to people in different tones depending on the mood of his day. He was like that because he was abandoned. His owner was a cynical pacifist nobody like him, but he was a bigwig in ceremonial events. He was also respected because he was an informer and gave a lot of dossier to the police.

One time, he got into a convoluted argument with an atheist. He lost the fight and stormed out of the vestibule. In frustration, he threw Jeff the camcorder onto a tumulus and left him there. Jeff was isolated for a long time and was lost in the forest, but he never gave up on his owner. So, he travels for reconnaissance to see his owner. When he saw his owner, he saw that the owner was looking for him too. After they met together Jeff felt lenient for his owner and hopped back into his arms. Eventually, they became friend after they both got lost in the forest and work well for their job again.

Annisa

4/7/2021 09:50:48 am

Great story! The story is interesting, but it gets confusing on who is the “he”, as it could either be the camcorder or the owner. Try to fix it :)

Michael

4/7/2021 09:53:16 am

Michael

4/7/2021 09:53:46 am

Accidentally pressed submit not finished

Michael

4/7/2021 10:06:22 am

There was once a guy Oliver who is a atheist working at CBC acting like a bigwig with his co worker Connor. Connor was Oliver’s colleague working as a informer. Connor as a pacifist didn’t believe in violence like Oliver did, Because of this Connor and Oliver’s relationship was convoluted

It’s June 5th 2011. Oliver and Connor has been assigned film the Chinese ceremonial event with the new camcorder CBC provided. Connor has a cynical attitude towards Oliver because Oliver is manipulative to benefit only himself, Because of this Connor is prepared for anything Oliver tries to do. Connor and Oliver soon arrive at their destination only to be empty and isolated, Connor soon realized what Oliver was doing but it was too late Oliver has disappeared.

Connor walked until he ran into a small village. He asked the people living there if they knew where the nearest transportation station was but they all spoke in Chinese with different tones. Soon Connor found someone who spoke English and told Connor the nearest station is 10 km away. When he arrived there was a bus with a oblong shaped logo, Connor asked if this bus drives to the Chinese ceremony. Skeptical Connor had no other option.

Soon Connor found Oliver and they flew back to the CBC station. Connor still furious with what Oliver did he decided to sue him. The lawyer looked at Oliver’s dossier and he has a clean past. Because of this the lawyer was lenient and let Oliver off the hook.

Connor and Oliver was soon assigned to find out why the Greek tumulus was very popular. Walking down the vestibule they were on their plane ready to take off. Connor and Oliver saw some military reconnaissance aircrafts nearby the airport. Soon Connor realizes that there is a war going on in the village of the tumulus.

William

4/7/2021 10:13:35 am

John, a strict atheist, a pacifist and is very cynical. He loves using his camcorder to record documents. He has many dossiers of criminals and offenders. Many considered him as the bigwig of the town.
One day an informed reported a crime to the police. John decided to try and catch this criminal and hopefully get praised by the community. The reconnaissance said the criminal was supposed to be in an isolated area near a tumulus. John quick ly sprinted through the vestibule, exiting the door and getting in the car.
When he arrived, he saw a old lady looking out the window wearing a ceremonial dress. The police cars were leaving it seemed like but John didn't notice. John thought the old lady was the criminal. John knocked on the door with a fake toy gun entering the old lady's house. The lady seemed lenient at first but then her face turned red as John slowly entered the house. It turned into a convoluted arguement with raising tones of both people. The old lady got the nearest oblong object and slapped John in the face. He left in embarrassment.

Kai

4/7/2021 10:17:52 am

There was once a guy named Jeff and Jeff was an atheist who worked for his bigwig Steve. Jeff is a news reporter so he went around the world interviewing people or taking photos with his camcorder for the news. One day he was sent into his bosses office and Steve was looking at Jeff's dossier. "Jeff your informer has gotten the Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease and can't work. Your new substitute informer will be Bob. Bob is a cynical atheist who shares many likes and dislikes with you." Jeff you will now be going to France to report an anomaly detected by the Mont Saint-Michel." "I will do my best." Jeff and Bob flew across the sea in an oblong plane and when they landed, they saw many pacifists on a tumulus that said "John Wick" on it. They started walking and saw a man with a sign that said Bob and Jeff. They walked up to the boat and the man on the boat asked if they were the reporters who are checking the anomaly? "Yes" said Bob. "Get in the boat." They got into the boat and the oarsman rowed the boat all the way to a hotel where their was a ceremonial vestibule where they could sleep. The next day the started walking over to the Mont Saint-Michel and there was a isolated reconnaissance standing there. This reconnaissance was very lenient and each guard spoke in different tones. At the anomaly there was a convoluted item that the FBI confiscated. "Well looks like we found our story." Said Bob. "We sure did." Said Jeff.

Leighton

4/7/2021 10:18:11 am

There was a pacifist that didn't believe that violence will solve anything so he bought a camcorder to film for the news. He was filming a fight between a atheist and a pacifist. There was a was a cynical person named bob who keep on changing his tones to mock people with a strange accent. There was a guy named bob who was in an oblong house he got to work in his car to go to the airport so he could be in a plane for a high level reconnaissance for his ceremonial party.

Amrita

4/7/2021 02:38:54 pm

Story of all word work words

There once was a man named Bill. He was a photographer and often used a CAMCORDER to take photographs. Bill hated the idea of being a photographer as he had a passion for becoming an Artist since he loved to draw OBLONG faces.

Although Bill's BIGWIG Dan was a very LENIENT person who overall was kind hearted, didn’t like the fact that Bill was an ATHEIST and never went to any CEREMONIAL events. So, he gave Bill a very CONVOLUTED task. Dan gave all DOSSIER information about the task to Bill. Bill had to be ISOLATED for a while to think about the difficult task and after a few hours, he agreed to complete the task. The assignment was to take pictures of Mount Everest. As Bill reached Mount Everest, he slowly began to notice that his voice changed. His TONES was different from back home. As Bill climbed up the mountain, he saw other people who were PACIFISTS and he changed his CYNICAL attitude to a pacifist. After reaching the top Bill RECONNAISSANCE the mountain and took some amazing pictures. He also found some TUMULUS stones and collected some to impress his boss.

After reaching back home, he went to his boss with a VESTIBULE and became an INFORMER for the task. Dan was extremely delighted to see the pictures and the stones and gave Bill a raise.

Matthew

4/7/2021 04:59:59 pm

Once there was a BIGWIG called Jimmy. He was the boss of the company called Ikea. He has a CAMCORDER he records videos of animals. Today Jimmy is going to the US.

First he went to Disney Land and saw Donald Duck, Winnie the Pooh and Piglet. He went on a ride, the ride went in an OBLONG shape. He talked to a person that told him he was an ATHEIST and he does not believe in God. Next he ran to another ride, and the ride made many TONES such as beeping noises.

Next, he flew to Sydney, Australia. Jimmy arrived with a friend at the museum and saw CEREMONIAL swords. They were really old and extra special. He found a letter about his so he went to the police station and stole a DOSSIER of information from the police. Jimmy’s grandparents died so he went to their grave, where he put flowers on top of the TUMULUS. Jimmy felt very ISOLATED because his grandparents died. His mom and dad were more LENIENT on him by being nice to him because he felt sad. His life was very CONVOLUTED. He has trouble doing homework and playing Roblox.

He went on a RECONNAISSANCE mission to rob the bank. When he got there he noticed that the VESTIBULE was locked. He found an INFORMER to help him but the informer was a PACIFIST so he did not tell Jimmy. he gave up on robbing the bank. He felt very CYNICAL because he was not happy.

Suhani

4/7/2021 08:34:58 pm

It’s a wrap up everyone! I’ll see you tomorrow. One upon a time there was a girl named Charlotte, she was 24 years old and was a PACIFIST. She was in a show called “At the park” Charlotte had fun working in that show.

Her set was a house and there was a VESTIBULE made with only glitter. Inside there was a stick but the stick was covered with silver and gold glitter. The camera men usually use a CAMCORDER for shooting. When Charlotte went there for their first time, the BIGWIG there, was LENIENT and he told her that this is a hunted place, Charlotte did get scared for the first time but then she got used to it since there was nothing scary happening. Charlotte had also hired a bodyguard to always go check the set and see if there was something spooky going around and Charlotte’s bodyguard was an INFORMER. His name was Luke. Luke was an ATHEIST means he did not believe in god.

Then one day in the afternoon after Charlotte finished her shot. Luke went to check again on the set-in case. When Luke was walking by, he found a file with a bunch of papers in it. When he went closer and closer, he found a DOSSIER about someone named Jake. Full name Jake Hamilton, Luke got a little shocked and said “Luke Hamilton!!?? that name sounds familiar!!” Also, there was a section in which there was supposed to be a picture of Jake but instead it said, “FIND ME” Then Luke also found out that Jake Hamilton is CYNICAL. Then Charlotte came by and screamed “Luke!! My break is over we are going to start shooting in one minute!! Come on here!” Luke was hiding the papers somewhere behind a rusty old steel container and he ran to Charlotte. When Luke was going to say that he had found a DOSSIER of someone Charlotte had started acting. Luke was still thinking that he had heard this name before, but he does not know where.

When Charlotte had finished her acting the BIGWIG said “Nice job Charlotte! Your act is getting a lot better!” Charlotte said “Thanks!!” When Charlotte came to Luke Charlotte thought that Luke looked a little worried, but she ignored it since she was like that from the start. Charlotte waved her hand at Luke and he said “Hey, um Charlotte I wanted to talk to you about something...” Charlotte said, “Luke come on I am already so exhausted!!” Luke followed Charlotte in the car and Luke drove Charlotte to Charlotte’s house. When they reached their Luke said, “See you then bye. I will also need to talk to you tomorrow” Charlotte said, “Yeah see Ya” Then Luke went to the set again and tried to find the DOSSIER. He found it and sat in a corner and Luke felt very sleepy. He wanted to read the papers, but he slept on the ground. It was morning and the time was nine. Charlotte called Luke and he said, “I am so sorry Mam I will be right there!” Luke realized that he slept at Charlotte’s set. Luke grabbed his keys and went in his car to pick up Charlotte for the set. When he reached there, he was all sweaty and looked tired. Charlotte was already in her fancy dress and they both went to the set. while Luke was driving the car, he was talking to Charlotte and he said, “Charlotte I have to tell you something now please!!!!!” reply was, “Fine but fast!!” Luke explained everything to Charlotte, and he also said that he had found a DOSSIER about someone named Luke Hamilton. Charlotte was shocked but kept on listening to Luke, then Charlotte told Luke that, “Okay, Luke this is a serious problem, and we cannot tell anyone!! Today we will go there together and see what’s going on. Luke agreed and they had already reached the shooting set. Charlotte was almost done with her acting and Luke was waiting at the corner. When it was night, Charlotte and Luke had everything ready in case.

They both went inside the haunted house and found a room with an old bed and there were spiderwebs all around the room and a rusty desk. Charlotte and Luke kept exploring until, they heard some TONES. Charlotte got scared but she whispered, “Luke where is this sound coming from?” Luke said, “Oh I think it is at the right side!” When both went to the right side, they could hear the tone from the other side, and it kept on happening and they kept on going Charlotte said “What are with these TONES? What is behind this?!” Luke said nothing but kept thinking about the DOSSIER and the name. Charlotte said “Hey Luke! I think it will be easier if you and I split up and see what's happening, okay?” Luke said, “Okay alright, we’ll split up but be careful” Charlotte said “Okay!” They both split up and Charlotte found a small TUMULUS outside a broken window and she said “Huh!!?? Why is there a TUMULUS here?” She climbed and went out the window. When she went c

Waylon

4/8/2021 08:39:51 am

Once there was a young monkey named Ethan in a circus. He was very smart and could spell some words on stage. His favourite word was “island”. On the other hand, there was a bigwig, the owner of the circus, who was named Mr. Bigwig. He was an atheist who just believed in money. He claimed himself as one of the pacifists, but he was belligerent and held a cynical attitude to others. Mr. Bigwig always spoke in harsh tones, forcing the animals to train and to perform every day. Usually, to show his arrogance, he raised his head and left his hands on his oblong belly. There was also a guard, who always carried a camcorder with him; without it he could do nothing. Acting like an informer, he was called Mr. Informer. Gradually, Ethan got tired of all of this, so he devised a plan to escape to an island where was isolated by water and free of people.
One night, Mr. Bigwig hosted a ceremonial party to celebrate his birthday. Both Mr. Bigwig and Mr. Informer became drunk, so Mr. Informer forgot to lock Ethan’s cage when he was putting him back. As Mr. Informer fell into a heap in the vestibule of the performance tent, Ethan slid out of his cage. As Ethan was quite sensitive to alcohol, he was drunk too when he smelled the odor of the alcohol. He wobbled through the vestibule and into the office. There, he rummaged around the filing cabinets until he found his dossier – an animal ID card. Then he hid the camcorder and tiptoed out of the circus camp with his ID card dangling around his neck.
Feared of being chased by Mr. Bigwig, Ethan chose to avoid major roads, and stumbled across the wild fields. He almost crashed into trees several times and lost his ID card. Before long, he was feeling tired, thirsty, and hungry. Even worse, he lost his way in front of a vast tumulus. With little energy left, Ethan could hardly do his reconnaissance around the tumulus to find his way and fell to the ground.
Not knowing how long he slept, Ethan was woken up by the sound of coughing and found a watchman squatting down watching him curiously. Quickly Ethan grappled to recover his awareness and picked up a stick, scribbling the word “island” in the dust. The watchman was astonished, and soon noticed that the monkey was shivering and exhausted. Fortunately, the watchman was very lenient to Ethan. He fed him with some water and food. But he still didn’t understand why and how the monkey could spell the word “island”. Then Ethan started squeaking and mimicking a swimming action in a funny stance, so the watchman understood that Ethan wanted to go to an island.
Next day, Mr. Bigwig found Ethan was away, but he was too fat to chase Ethan, so he urged the guard to search for the monkey, but Mr. Informer was busy looking for his camcorder, and refused to do anything without it. At last, with the help of the watchman, Ethan got to the island. He finally was free!!!

Waylon

4/8/2021 08:43:27 am

Once there was a young monkey named Ethan in a circus. He was very smart and could spell some words on stage. His favourite word was “island”. On the other hand, there was a bigwig, the owner of the circus, who was named Mr. Bigwig. He was an atheist who just believed in money. He claimed himself as one of the pacifists, but he was belligerent and held a cynical attitude to others. Mr. Bigwig always spoke in harsh tones, forcing the animals to train and to perform every day. Usually, to show his arrogance, he raised his head and left his hands on his oblong belly. There was also a guard, who always carried a camcorder with him; without it he could do nothing. Acting like an informer, he was called Mr. Informer. Gradually, Ethan got tired of all of this, so he devised a plan to escape to an island where was isolated by water and free of people.

One night, Mr. Bigwig hosted a ceremonial party to celebrate his birthday. Both Mr. Bigwig and Mr. Informer became drunk, so Mr. Informer forgot to lock Ethan’s cage when he was putting him back. As Mr. Informer fell into a heap in the vestibule of the performance tent, Ethan slid out of his cage. As Ethan was quite sensitive to alcohol, he was drunk too when he smelled the odor of the alcohol. He wobbled through the vestibule and into the office. There, he rummaged around the filing cabinets until he found his dossier – an animal ID card. Then he hid the camcorder and tiptoed out of the circus camp with his ID card dangling around his neck.

Feared of being chased by Mr. Bigwig, Ethan chose to avoid major roads, and stumbled across the wild fields. He almost crashed into trees several times and lost his ID card. Before long, he was feeling tired, thirsty, and hungry. Even worse, he lost his way in front of a vast tumulus. With little energy left, Ethan could hardly do his reconnaissance around the tumulus to find his way and fell to the ground.

Not knowing how long he slept, Ethan was woken up by the sound of coughing and found a watchman squatting down watching him curiously. Quickly Ethan grappled to recover his awareness and picked up a stick, scribbling the word “island” in the dust. The watchman was astonished, and soon noticed that the monkey was shivering and exhausted. Fortunately, the watchman was very lenient to Ethan. He fed him with some water and food. But he still didn’t understand why and how the monkey could spell the word “island”. Then Ethan started squeaking and mimicking a swimming action in a funny stance, so the watchman understood that Ethan wanted to go to an island.

The next day, Mr. Bigwig found Ethan was away, but he was too fat to chase Ethan, so he urged the guard to search for the monkey, but Mr. Informer was busy looking for his camcorder, and refused to do anything without it. At last, with the help of the watchman, Ethan got to the island. He finally was free!!!

Comments are closed.

Spring Breakdown Rap!

SOCIAL MEDIA HUB

About Us

Archives

Categories